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Sit, my love, and stay your hand,
take the seat and drink your ale.
I speak of strange deed in a foreign land,
A lover's dry and bitter tale.

A man there was, beloved he,
to one woman's heart was dear
Til envy's wrath was loosed and free
A jealous rival with naught to fear

This man's wife was stole one night
Our tragic lover's soul was broken
In curses loud, his mind took flight
And dark words spilled, forcibly spoken

A passing spirit, cruel of heart,
heard the grim and mighty vow
And wove a spell of evil art
That blackened our hero's noble brow

From town to town, this man did tread
For his love's pure face, his futile quest.
By music did he earn his bread
Soft music called, the heart to wrest.

In ragged clothes, e'er did he search,
Melodies played in tavern and bar,
By moonlight he stood, by yon silver birch
And sang of loss, of journeys far.

To such heartbroke sound, the women fell,
Our handsome hero took his fill.
From men and children, they followed his spell,
His dark heart bade them to night's vile chill

Sugar-laced, was his tongue, to havoc wreak,
Female heart set a glow.
And in lonely glade, on moorside bleak,
the evil spirit's power did grow.

When, sated, his lover was not to be found,
When damnable spirit's lust was filled,
He took his fair victim's hands and bound,
And to murky earth her young blood was spilled.

In foul demon's retreat, his guilt would sore ache,
and silvered tongue in song would cry
Of another young heart, his to break,
In spirit's shackled essence, left to die

So, listen, fair lady, and pray your heart is wise,
Stay clear of the man who plays the lonesome guitarra
Let your ears not hear his song, nor his lies,
Lest you end up dead, on the moors of Knocknacarra



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My entry for =windfalcon's "Names of Galway" competition. The point of it was to take one of the names from the list, and draw whatever came to mind, rather than what the name actually was. After some deliberation, I took Knocknacarra, with the intent of drawing a bard type musician that first came to mind. But as I doodled, it turned into the pencil work you see above, accompanied by a long poem, detailing the young man's escapades. This is currently being watecoloured, but as the deadline is today, I figured I'd post the pencil first, then update it later when I get the coloured one done.

Both poem and art are my own creation. Why doesn't Deviantart have some kind of category for people who want equal emphasis on both writing and art?

And if anyone tells me that Knocknacarra has no moors, or was nothing to do murdering gypsy musicians with an evil spell on their heart, don't blame me when I tell you in no uncertain terms to read the description. :)

My thanks to ~thejadedone whose stock provided just the right ambiance for this piece: [link] He's a treasure!

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:iconmila-valentine:
This is very very beautiful, all the details and the pose are stunning. :love: Good luck in the contest!

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:icondoscaras:
Marvelous work! I love the style of the drawing, and his clothes.

Are you going to colour it?

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Acojonant and tremeabund.
:iconringofnighshade:
Cool hippie-bard dude. Sorry, that's just what came to mind. Nice poem and good luck on the contest (I entered too!).

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:iconladydove7:
Yaay you already know I love this being a tad partial to Romani imagery, myself. I love the way you've interpreted the clothing with the charms and embroidery. The shirt wrinkles and his forlorn gaze are spot on. I just want to sit and stare at him. There's something fascinating about acoustic guitars and forlorn men.

I agree, I write way too many long descriptions that most people just blast right through since it's 'art' and not a story. They really should have something for the both of them.

Can't wait to see this in color! Good luck in the contest, m'dear:)

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:iconoukami-kaji:
wow! that is extremly well done. both the work and the written aspects. how long did the prose take you to write? cuz wow. its amazing. :wow:

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:iconwindfalcon:
Jesus, Sam...

I don't know what's more amazing, the poem or the drawing. As I was reading the poem, I just kept thinking to myself, "not only is this woman an amazing artist, but she's an incredible poet as well." He looks so....peaceful, yet there's just a hint of something sinister. It's almost as if looking into his eyes would unleash something frightening. I don't know if I've told you this before, but I love how even your pencil drawings are full of detail and capture just what you're aiming to show.

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:icongoldensalamander:
I'm commenting on the drawing now, and will do the poem later. Love it, the delicacy of the line and the pose. I really really like the pose and the clothes. Why indeed couldn't we have a separate section, since I would be there too. :D I haven't taken time to do any drawings for my poems............but maybe I should.

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:iconhettar7:
because most people here aren't as multitalented as you are? really really like .. everything here. :heart:

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"That's not Fair!"
"Really? You say that so often. I wonder what your basis for comparison is?" :sushi: :fuzzydemon:
:iconlibertyrenegade:
That's sweet.

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If they can put a man on the moon, why can't they leave him there? [link]
:iconlibertyrenegade:
Um...sorrowfully sweet? And haunting.

Don't mean to be reamed for missing a meaning :sweatdrop: :sprint:

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If they can put a man on the moon, why can't they leave him there? [link]

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