Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
©2007-2010 *Zephyri
:iconzephyri:

Artist's Comments

Apologies to those of you who've seen this piece before, I was scouring through my older works looking for stuff I wanted rid of, and realised dA had annoyingly sized the original picture down as a preview to the text. So I'm reuploading as a picture, with the text as the description, (hence all the wording below), as I cannot for the life in me figure out how to change category from lit to art.

I love this picture for two reasons, one, it's of my main protagonist from my mammoth novel project, hit.the.floor, Nick, finally exacting revenge on the man who betrayed his father's trust. And two, it was the first ever picture where I made use of the wonderful *jademacalla's stock pictures. Who'd have thought so far down the line it would have led to what I consider a dear friendship and loads more awesome collaborations on both his projects and mine. Here's to even more, Jade, just wanted to say thanks for all your great inspiration over the past couple of years.

Good ol' pencil on paper, a vastly underused medium in my repertoire. Text below is optional, feel free to read and comment if you happen to have the time. One note: the silencer was on the original stock picture, before I preferred being more accurate to the text, so strictly speaking it shouldn't be in the picture, but artistic licence says it looks better than without.

Hit the Floor and characters within are © to me, Sam Hogg. No use or reposting of this image without my permission.



-------------------------------------------------


Karl, who had paused in his violence for a moment, was taking in their exchange with a passing interest and a crooked smile. As Toni's livid eyes settled on him, he was struck by the memory of another female, one he had seen grow through the innocence of youth into an attractive young woman. His attraction had been one of the reasons he had asked to be removed from that assignment, perhaps at least until the young woman's father and brother were dead. Only then could he have returned to comfort her, to finally have her. However, that particular plan had been scuppered by the machinations and sly skills of the man out cold on the floor in front of him. Janet Trestler's brother, Nick. Because of Ryder's idiocy, Janet was dead, and he would never know what it felt like to hold her.

Hard Russian features crinkled into a grimace at that thought, and seriousness took its usual place as he cocked the hammer on the gun.

“I wonder if he knows” Karl paused in a rare spoken thought, driven to bitterness at something he would never have chance to enjoy. He cast a glance askance at his employer ignoring the firey, barbed looks his female captive was giving , “I'd have gladly screwed his sister once he was dead?”

He tensed up for the shot as he turned back, his gaze following the grayed metal of the gun's line of sight.

In those scant couple of seconds before he had chance to pull the trigger, the figure in front of him shifted. He caught the blur of movement, a metallic glint in flesh arcing out from under what he had foolishly presumed to be an unconscious body. The word ‘bastard’ carried to his ears on the snarled breath of his intended mark, a second before the crack of the firing pin in the Sig 226. Karl couldn't take in the air fast enough to gasp as his skull imploded inwards, a gory path carved by the suck of energy the spinning 9mm gold-plated slug left.

Nick watched the Russian's stunned face fall backwards like a cardboard cut out just nudged over, the impact of his bullet the gentle push that sent him down. Half way through the fall, the man's control over his limbs slackened and he buckled into a corpse on the concrete, a bloody streak dribbling from the bone-splintered cavity just off the centre of his nose.

Ignoring the cry of his nerves as his body registered the damage done by the fallen assassin's polished shoe tips, Nick swung his gun once more. Jay's vivid blue eyes, lost in the darkness of the shadows on his face and his thick black lashes came to rest on Nick's own, his body shielded behind Toni’s, his well honed arm outstretched over her shoulder, propping up the gun he held.

Nick drew in a haggard breath, fighting back the screeching pain in his sides, and gingerly rolled onto his back, his right hand finally coming to steady his left on the weapon as he aimed between his legs at Jay's face. For just a moment, nothing but the giant waxy fronds of the nearby palm trees moved in the warm breeze. Even the din of the city seemed to simmer to nothing but a static buzz, as if the gravity of Karl Rollinger's sudden death had just sunk in and a newfound respect was due the younger Trestler lying bloodstained and grimacing on the ground.

The creased grin that formed on Jay’s face broke the reverie.

“Smooth, Trestler, very smooth. You’re the first to get Karl off balance. The only man to kill him. Congratulations.”

Comments


love 1 1 joy 0 0 wow 1 1 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icondragynfyre-of-ice:
Nice - fantastic pose along with a fantastic story behind it. I like the piece very much! :D

--
~'Dum spiro, spero...' .:. While I breathe, I hope.... ~
:icondragynfyre-of-ice:
Oh, and a question out of curiousity- if this doesn't involve an overabundance of explanation or something complicated on your part... What's the significance necklace/charm/pendant hanging from his hand? (having to deal with his father? ;p)

--
~'Dum spiro, spero...' .:. While I breathe, I hope.... ~
:iconhokuto:
Ooooooh excellence. o.o The shading is freaking gorgeous, and damnit - I want to read the whole novel eventually. ;o;

--
My family!
:heart: ~hiddentohru ~assiah ~sweetyt ~squirrelneko ~spectralaesthete ~angelshade ~RkoZukin *fou-chan :heart:

GIANT ART SALE!
:iconzephyri:
Not at all... I've changed that particular charm a little since I first wrote this section and did the picture... originally, the bullet was going to be of some precious metal, Nick was saving it for just a purpose as killing Karl, but since then I've actually changed the history a little, so really, it should be a squashed bullet nose (lord knows the terminology for the deadly solid bit of the 9mm bullet escapes my brain right now), removed from a wound from which his father almost died,no thanks to Nick's interventions. He wears it as a reminder to keep his temper under control and to consider his actions more reasonably. It doesn't always work that well.
:icondragynfyre-of-ice:
:D! hehehe sweet. I love it when stories run off on their own ;p

--
~'Dum spiro, spero...' .:. While I breathe, I hope.... ~
:iconzephyri:
I keep saying I hope you'll get the chance eventually, I need to get off my ass and finish the damned thing!
:iconaceinit:
I love the angle on this! And I, too, would love to read the novel.

--
I reject your reality and substitute my own
--Mythbusters.
:iconzephyri:
Hey Ang! Great to see you comment, how's your own novel coming on? I'd still really like to get round to reading more of it myself! Hopefully this longass project will see fruition soon, if I can steal myself to write that final dreaded scene!
:iconokina-tyan:
Why?!Why Russians allways bad or stupid or smthng else?!
PS
Groovy pic as allways!:horns:

--
:paranoid:Psst => [link]
:iconzephyri:
Sorry m'dear... I don't mean to offend Russians! And Karl is anything but stupid, or bad, actually... I just wanted him to be cool and not too excitable, which looking at Russia's history seems to suit your geological and political climate. Trust me, there are much worse people in this novel, and most of them are American!

Details

September 10, 2007
193 KB
193 KB
710×1000

Statistics

75
139 [who?]
5,445 (2 today)
38 (0 today)

Site Map